How I Write My Novels by Guest Blogger MaryLu Tyndall
(This is the first blog of award-winning historical author MaryLu Tyndale's Writer Tips we will be sharing on our chapter blog that have greatly influenced my writing. They come from her archive by permission and still have great information for writers. Hope they bless you like they have me. MaryLu's latest historical romance, Charity's Cross, will be released February 1. --Elva Martin)
Happy New Year, everyone! My dear friends and blog followers, you have
become so special to me over the years. I pray that with hard work and prayer,
all your resolutions and dreams will come true this year!
This week I began the task of
what I call the polishing phase of writing. I've completed my
first draft of Forsaken Dreams (All 65,000 words of it that needs to be 100,000
words! Yikes!) and now I start way back in Chapter 1 and go through line
by line, adding a little spit here, rubbing off a stain there, until it is
almost as shiny as I can get it!
For a writer who's a plotter, this may be a foreign concept. Once they've written their book, aside from a read-over, they are done. Not me! This is where the real fun begins. Where the scenes come to life, where the characters really take on individual personalities, where I actually feel the ups and downs and extremes of every emotion. (Anyone got a hanky?)
Yes, I do cry sometimes at my own
writing. I'm that sappy. Then again, I cry at Hallmark commercials too, so what
do I know?
This can be the most fun part of
writing a novel and it can be the most difficult. Spread out on my desk
as you can see in this picture, I have many things to help me keep track of all
the details.
To the right of my monitor, are
my character pictures. I have
a picture for nearly everyone in the story. This helps me visualize them while
I'm writing. Also on the right, you'll see my stack of Research books all ready for me
should I need to look up something I don't remember. In front of them on the
desk are very important index cards!!
There is one for each of the main characters (There are 6 in this book)
On each index card I list
important info such as:
- Hair and eye color
- Physical description
- Quirks such as, walks with a limp or very antisocial, or grinds teeth together when doesn't get his way
- Favorite expressions or sayings: Fiddle sticks, Oh Bosh!
- Personality: Are they a free spirit, independent, insecure, fearful, courageous, humorous, depressing, spooky, devoted
- Struggles and problems: Abandonment issues, bitter, angry, don't trust easily..
- Family and other connections
That way, if I forget a detail
(And I always do with so many characters), I can just glance at the card!
On the left side of my desk beside my coffee cup are my in-depth character sheets which go into much greater detail and give background for each character and secondary character.
Then on my computer I have other documents I bring up while I'm writing
On the left side of my desk beside my coffee cup are my in-depth character sheets which go into much greater detail and give background for each character and secondary character.
Then on my computer I have other documents I bring up while I'm writing
- A Chapter by Chapter summary of the story (I usually have about a paragraph for each chapter) These I already put together when I wrote the first draft. They also include the date of each scene so I can keep track of where I am in time.
- A To-Remember document which lists things I need to keep track of. Like how long someone was married. What year did their brother die? What battle they fought in. When did his father abandon him? (I mean who can keep track of all of this for over 20 characters???)
- An Add-in Document which lists all the ideas I came up with when I was doing dishes, taking a walk, running errands and taking a bath that I want to add into the main story.
Now, I'm ready to go!! I “polished”
five chapters this week, which is a good pace for me! I'm adding things
like:
Character descriptions
Emotions
Dialogue tags
Sounds, Smells
Scene descriptions
Polishing up sentences
Filling in historic details I didn't know at the time
Finally, getting rid of things that don't work or don't sound right. It's hard work but I finally see the story and characters coming to life!
Character descriptions
Emotions
Dialogue tags
Sounds, Smells
Scene descriptions
Polishing up sentences
Filling in historic details I didn't know at the time
Finally, getting rid of things that don't work or don't sound right. It's hard work but I finally see the story and characters coming to life!
About MaryLu Tyndall
A Christy Award finalist and best-selling author, MaryLu Tyndall dreamt of tall ships and swashbuckling heroes during her childhood years on Florida’s Atlantic Coast. She holds a degree in Math and worked as a software engineer for fifteen years. Trapped in a land-locked cubicle, she was often seen pounding furiously upon the keyboard during her lunch hour, creating what would become her Legacy of the King’s Pirates series, all the while believing God’s promise to her that. “If you write it, I will get it published”. And He did! Fourteen books later, her loving husband and six children still haven’t gotten used to her historic costumes and nautical speech. MaryLu describes herself as an introvert, patriot, mother of six, the neighborhood cat-lady, tall ship enthusiast, friend of pirates and mermaids, obsessive compulsive control freak, history lover, hopeless romantic, and a sword wielding princess-warrior of the King of Kings. Her books are filled with adventure and romance and themes that are guaranteed to touch your heart! She continues to pen her romantic tales on the California coast while managing a home, husband, six adult kids, and several stray cats who have decided that her keyboard is the best place to sleep! She believes that without popcorn and chocolate, life would not be worth living, and her sole motivation in life is to bring others closer to God.